能否批改一下我寫的2010年考研英語(yǔ)小作文？

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• 百同學(xué)
  英語(yǔ)零基礎(chǔ)怎么學(xué)習(xí)考研英語(yǔ)作文
  • 杜老師
    英語(yǔ)作文的提高其實(shí)和大家平時(shí)的積累息息相關(guān)。在平時(shí)多背一些經(jīng)典詞句段落，可能在寫作的時(shí)候不太能夠想起來(lái)，但是確實(shí)是積累了語(yǔ)感，對(duì)寫作也是很有幫助的。尤其是考試時(shí)候的英語(yǔ)作文，其實(shí)卷面的整潔與否真的很重要。大多數(shù)人其實(shí)在考試時(shí)的發(fā)揮都差不多，如果你的作文比較整潔，文字清晰，必然會(huì)讓改卷老師產(chǎn)生好印象，作文得分也能夠相對(duì)提高。
• 江同學(xué)
  關(guān)于高學(xué)歷能否找到好工作的英語(yǔ)作文
  • 徐老師
    now increasingly competitive and to find a job is too difficult. some people think that highly educated must be able to find a good job because education can prove that a person has a good capacity. in addition the company is now the interviews are generally required a high academic qualification so that the highly educated is looking for a job a stepping-stone. others would argue that education does not necessarily able to find a good job and now the community talking about the working ability and efficiency for example some people had high academic qualifications but his ability is very limited. in my opinion although education does not necessarily allow you to find a good job and when he can at least help you find a good job